HipnikDragomir's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lady from Estonia]

Flawed

The overall picture is pretty and all, but there are some serious flaws here and there. Her right arm and shoulder, torso, her right cheek, and the space between her eyes. Is there a reference picture?

Flashmovieboy responds:

some of the flaws are due to some areas being hidden and I had to improvise those bits so that picture could become complete. Another portion of flaws are due to exaggerated transforming where I stretched and collapsed picture in a way to improve overall impression and to hide anatomy flaws that appeared because my smartphone camera distorted the image. I can insist that in real life the picture looks way better in terms of proportions.

btw yes, there is a reference : http://tinyurl.com/85g9g66

but I do appreciate your criticism and thank you ! :)

[Dat Grub]

Cool

This is pretty professional looking. Nice pacing, panel organization, and all that. Good character design, too. With the writing, I notice a lack of apostrophes. Do use them.

UNDERNATION responds:

My lack of good grammar is statement about education and society, how dare you!

[Kankers]

Oh, my.

If they actually looked like this, the Ed boys wouldn't be so quick to run away from them. Good job.

IkaroKruz responds:

Haha, thanks!:D

["Self Portrait"]

Well drawn

It's very well drawn has a unique art style, but being coloured with crayons (or so it seems), the colour isn't solid and has those white spots sprinkled about. The trousers are plain with with a bunch of circles - not sure if that's how they are or whatever. The hair looks way too imbalanced with the majority being on her right side. The outlines are too messy looking and not completely sharp. The eyebrows don't match and there are a few messy, useless lines here and there. Also, her right eye is too wide with the white going over the hair. Otherwise, it looks nice. The colouring itself is pretty and the hair texture looks fab. The signature is a nice touch. Good job.

Fnibble responds:

My hair is actually like that,(I choose it to be uneven) and the white circles are holes in my white belt for adjusting. It was coloured with smooth color pencils, which really didn't smooth things out (I take blame for that)
Aannd yeah I'm stilll getting used to using felt tip pens (but I like the shabby outlines), and the white over eye was intentional, although I might change that in the future.

Thanks for the input :3

[Night]

Goddamnit

It's so pretty and well made. Just mezmerizing. I like how the view/foliage twists. But damnit, it's too small. Is this the actual size you worked on?

aniadraws responds:

no it was a much larger resolution.

[Tasha dubois]

Mega giganto-hips

Other than that, this is a great piece. It draws from two different styles: realistic painting for the background and comic-y for the girl. It's all very well drawn; the background is breath-taking. Good job.

airman4 responds:

oh wow thanks a lot
yeah i love mixing style
it's a risk , glad some people love that!

[Royalty]

Holy freaking crap

This is spectacular! Man, I don't even know what to write. So much detail and colour and depth, etc. This is going as my new wallpaper. Excellent work.

Rabid-Echidna responds:

Yeah, I've started making all my new stuff in 1920x1080 resolution to serve as wallpapers. Poster resolution is kind of unwieldy, so I'm probably going to be uploading wallpaper resolution images on Newgrounds for a while and leaving the rest to DA.

[Drake is late]

Awesome!

I see Nate, Cole, Sev, Helghast, and a Chimera skull. Who's the guy with the blue scarf?
Anyway, this is well drawn. It's got that concept art look. The smoke looks really cool. Good joke with the plane.

Cenaf responds:

The blue scarf guy was supposed to be Joseph Capelli but he turned out not so similar to original one D:
Thanks.

[My characters are mad at me]

He has punctuation

Other than that, I get the idea here. Every creator starts off with something and later ditches it for something else. I do it too. If you can't keep making it good, then just let it be.

DarkVisionComics responds:

Exactlyyyy!

[The Elder Scrolls V: Skrim]

Skrim

You forgot the "y". Anyway, this is pretty decent. The art style is cartoony but a bit too simple. The layout is clean and neat so that's good. I don't really get the joke though. Either it's an in-joke or just something random. The Argonian's facial expressions in the first half are really funny.

Chickenlump responds:

I wanted to meaningfully answer your query, but then I TURNED INTO A ROBOT BEEP BOOP I AM A ROBOT FROM THE FUTURE BLARPA BARP I AM HERE TO TAKE AMERICAN JOBS FELIZ NAVIDAD.