Accurate
You really nailed the art style, although, the hands are kinda ugly. Also, there's no background. The show was meh, but whatever.
Accurate
You really nailed the art style, although, the hands are kinda ugly. Also, there's no background. The show was meh, but whatever.
thank you.... yeahi need to pratice more with the hands..... as of back ground i was thinking of doing one but really could work one around the pose. so next time i think i will more things in the image.
Nope
Son, this is a sketch, not an actual piece of art, therefore, you should've classified it as such and made it private because sketches are not allowed in the art portal. The hand has good anatomy and the conjoined neck is decent, but that's all you've got going for the content, itself.
How ignorant of a claim that is.
Nowhere in your statement did you even list as to what made this a sketch and not just a plain raw in the basic drawing.
Entertaining
This was really funny to read. I read all the dialogue in my head with the vaariety of voices from your animations. I see some punctuation probs here and there, but it's interesting and humourus to read this modern street lingo in a comic and not be insulting to the brain. Good job.
cheers
Cool
Yea, it's pretty accurate all-around and will totally help me with my horrid anatomy drawings. However, it seems to me that there's something odd about the arms. In proportion to the lower half of the body, they seem a bit short and thin, especially compared to them meaty thighs. I think it might be those lines between the legs on each thigh that throws me off. Maybe push those lines more towards the thighs so they won't look so phat.
ah thanks for pointing those out, I'll try to fix them ASAP.
Holy shit, dude, you should show this to her on her official facebook page. She actually reads and responds to what people tell her.
Already sent her message :D I really hope she will respond.
Pretty good
It would've been more interesting if the caged animal was "personificated" just like the guineapiggies to see how they would interact. Btw, on the second panel, it's "whose" not "who's". Keep up the good work.
Oops! Thanks for pointing that out!
Hater gonna hate
This is a really good loop. Are you using it in something?
Thanks! It was for an assignment, but I'm thinking of pixelizing it and using it in a game
Flawed
The overall picture is pretty and all, but there are some serious flaws here and there. Her right arm and shoulder, torso, her right cheek, and the space between her eyes. Is there a reference picture?
some of the flaws are due to some areas being hidden and I had to improvise those bits so that picture could become complete. Another portion of flaws are due to exaggerated transforming where I stretched and collapsed picture in a way to improve overall impression and to hide anatomy flaws that appeared because my smartphone camera distorted the image. I can insist that in real life the picture looks way better in terms of proportions.
btw yes, there is a reference : http://tinyurl.com/85g9g66
but I do appreciate your criticism and thank you ! :)
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