Very nice, very nice. This is coming along beautifully and I'm glad Jeff is voice acting at least for the trailer. I also love that it says "Made by Newgrounds". We need more of that.
Very nice, very nice. This is coming along beautifully and I'm glad Jeff is voice acting at least for the trailer. I also love that it says "Made by Newgrounds". We need more of that.
Funny stuff, my guy
Everything's very clean, top quality, no filler, super funny, etc. Getting really good at this ish. Well done.
My boi oddboy. Man, I think I only know you from the GG remixes. Anyways, great cartoon that's relateable to me since I've worked that damn job for over two years. Funny stuff with faces, timing and great fighting that I didn't expect. Luh the colour scheme of it all. For three weeks, you did well.
My dude, I just wanted to leave this quick review because of that telephone joke. God damn, son. The whole thing was really funny and well animated in the pixel art style. Sound, music, pacing, all of that. Stellar. Hope to see more xoxo
Well, the visuals were all good. Nice mix of the painted backgrounds with the cartoony characters. The audio sounded good, too. It's just that pretty much none of the jokes were funny. ... Not sure what else to say :D Work on the comedy.
My dude, I can't even. Your artistry alone is professional-tier. On top of that, your sense of humour along with the editing/layout of this trailer shows you really need to hit it big. Like, as big as the other NG greats. Can't wait, fam.
Damn, son, this was professional. My only two negatives would be that the audio in general is pretty compressed (doesn't sound clear) and that you should've given this a proper name. "Fan Animation" is a title where I expect the animation to be ass. It's why I hesitated to click on this in the first place.
I am Korean and I am not good at English.
So I didn't know that " fan animation " could be negative.
Thank you for advice!
First and foremost, I greatly dislike seeing that shitty minimalist Adventure Time art style, so that rubbed me the wrong way. Besides that, though, the cartoon was surprisingly good. The production values in general were pretty high with the voice acting, the animation, the VFX, audio, writing, etc. What I'd recommend is that you try to form your own art style and go from there.
There's definitely something here. I do see some sort of style going on with the marker-looking drawings and limited animation, but of course it looks rushed/unfinished/unrefined. The sounds, too, would help if they were all there. The story seemed vague, though, because of the rough presentation. Keep at it.
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