Okay
It was pretty funny. An actual plot did help. Do work on your animation and art style cos it looks very "first video amateur" Also, I'm pretty sure I saw some Oney jokes here and there. If i's a clever reference, fine, but a lame copy won't do. Voice acting was pretty good. Keep working on it.
I guess I focused more on making an actual plot then the quality of the artwork. Glad someone picked up on that, It's more of a reference, I wouldn't dare try to copy him. Good to know my voice acting is actually improving a bit. Thank you!
Loading Screen
I don't know if you know this or not, but 19mb on Newgrounds is a really big file. To properly wait for this thing, there's must be a pre-loader so we know if it's loading or not.
Thank you for your comment!
I am looking into how to place loading screens on movies right now. I have never done a loading screen before. 19 MB was the smallest file size I could get for this movie; however, I will try and make my other movies smaller.
Hilarious
I don't know why, but these morbid, fucked-up pictures of children crying next to Santa just crack me up. You did a good job with the presentation and keeping variety; the music is perfect. I also saw that Tom picture. Good stuff.
Thanks man, Yeah I don't know why it cracks me up so much too. Maybe we are just twisted :D
HIGH VOLTAGE
I love you (more) for that reference. The comedy level has certainly gone up along with the excellent voice acting. I love Mega Man's face when he wins. The only thing I can suggest for you at this point is to clean up your line-art. It makes it look campy and fun, but when it's clean, it'll look much better.
Line art is the biggest thing I struggle with. I have jittery hands in general and flash's "Smooth" brush things only make it worse haha
Excellent presentation
Good pacing and making it like a trailer, too. The sprites are well animated. However, let's be honest. No one in the Sonic universe would be able to handle anyone in the Dragon Ball Z universe. It'd be like Godzilla fighting a kitten.
yeah, but I plan to at least give them some chance when they arrive on mobius. You'll see what i'm talking about when it's finished.
:D fillerfillerfiller
Holy freaking crap, I can't believe mine turned out to be an easter egg! I guess not everyone will have the patience to find it, but whatever. Thanks, dude. Everything here is golden. It's been an honour working with you lads. Cheers.
Add as portal buddy so you can go in the credits mate!
Pretty...
...but no. Tests aren't allowed, no matter how well animated. If you can incorporate this into an actual video, that'd be swell.
Fair enough :) I have actually just now been told about the beta section and I'll be posting my tests there.
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