HipnikDragomir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hal's Donuts Pilot]

Okay

Here's some feedback:
The intro was too damn long. Credits are usually put in the end. You can put them in the beginning if it lasts for only, like three seconds.
Took way too long zooming in the house.
The voice acting is generally good. put the ear rape at the end was totally annoying.
Try to make the story and sequences flow; no awkward pauses and random things.
For a firsty, you've certainly shown some talent overall.

[Idocratic Boredom ep.1]

Wrong

This site is intended for Flash, not real footage.

MRLEGOGUY responds:

I wuz lazy

[asdfmovie4]

....

I really don't understand why people take so long to port something to Newgrounds. Sure, it won't get as many views as on YouTube, but Newgrounds is the main Flash place to go.

Wonchop responds:

Tom wanted a little Youtube exclusivity on this one before letting it out on other places.

[My first pilgrim flash]

Decent

For a firsty, you've certainly got vision. Unlike most other ones, you actually put the effort to make backgrounds and animate legitimately frame-by-frame, not abuse that cheap-ass tweening. Keep working at it. Also, use a preloader to make it more professional. There's a selection in the Downloads section on the site for free.

mbstudios909 responds:

Thanks!

[epic goku vs frieza]

Looks really good

But, yea, more would be better. Keep it uo.

[One Wish Upon a Star]

Excellent

That was a great twist. Great writing and animation.

[The Spider Problem]

Story of my life.

This used to happen to me too. I hate spiders. I absolutely loved his face after seeing the spider close-up.

[The Northern Incident]

Excellent

That was full of suspense and great pacing. As funny as the ending was, I felt like you ruined it with the silliness. Damn.

[Nerds can never love]

Ouch

Oh, man, that hurt.