Not YouTube
It's not because we think it's lame, but it's because Newgrounds is a FLASH site. There aren't supposed to be live action videos.
Not YouTube
It's not because we think it's lame, but it's because Newgrounds is a FLASH site. There aren't supposed to be live action videos.
Pretty good
Had a good joke and unique style with the photo backgrounds. I love the mouth effects you made with your mouth; made it all the more silly. Try downloading a pre-loader from the site to put on your video because it's annoying when it loops.
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This has been on Youtube for a long time. Why take so long?
Brilliant
Holy crap, that was one of the funniest thing I've ever watched on Newgrounds. Took a ridiculous feature and made it hilarious. Cheers.
Hilarious
I've always hated that stupid orange. Animation represents it much better along with the usual Newgrounds jokes.
Beautiful
You've certainly got vision; this is a great romanticizing of the season change. Well animated and the effects and music etc., but there are a few bits that could use a bit of improvement, like the rays of light shining down; especially the animated ones. Good job.
Pretty...
...but no. Tests aren't allowed, no matter how well animated. If you can incorporate this into an actual video, that'd be swell.
Fair enough :) I have actually just now been told about the beta section and I'll be posting my tests there.
Classic
Being associated with theatre, I totally got the whole pantomiming and it was brilliant. The story and animation also helped, even if it ended a bit abruptly. Good job.
Meh...
It's pretty and well animated enough, but too damn simple to be a keeper. You should have extended with more scenes.
Okay
Well, you had an idea, a bit of a story, and a joke. Two things would have significantly improved this: a faster framerate/ more frames, and better drawing/animating skills. I get this is supposed to be pantomime, so you don't necessarily need anything other than music.
I think im gonna work on some tweening, so that should improve my framrate. And maybe also allow some better art!
Thank you for your review and your constructive criticism:)
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