Alright so i think ur concept is funny, i rlly like the dudes reaction on the bottom right, and the characters look consistent..which is good because u want ur characters to look the same in each panel ... my main issue with the work..well it looks unfinished and unpresentable. My suggestion is to look at other comic books or comic strips as references, notice backgrounds and rendering styles. It doesn't hurt to experiment with styles and different colours. Other than that push it much further, see where u could take ur self using such elements. If u can make a much more presentable version of this... I WILL SCOUT U! just send me a newgrounds email wen ur done =) best of luck to u
Why, thank you. HOWEVER, the way I draw my comics (at this stage, at least) are just sketches. The way I draw in my free time is VERY quickly because I draw sketches as opposed to professional-looking art. At some point soon, I would like to start making them pretty, which will have to be digital cuz coloured pencils piss me off. And thank you very much for the promise; I'll do my best!
afiboy69
Alright so i think ur concept is funny, i rlly like the dudes reaction on the bottom right, and the characters look consistent..which is good because u want ur characters to look the same in each panel ... my main issue with the work..well it looks unfinished and unpresentable. My suggestion is to look at other comic books or comic strips as references, notice backgrounds and rendering styles. It doesn't hurt to experiment with styles and different colours. Other than that push it much further, see where u could take ur self using such elements. If u can make a much more presentable version of this... I WILL SCOUT U! just send me a newgrounds email wen ur done =) best of luck to u
HipnikDragomir
Why, thank you. HOWEVER, the way I draw my comics (at this stage, at least) are just sketches. The way I draw in my free time is VERY quickly because I draw sketches as opposed to professional-looking art. At some point soon, I would like to start making them pretty, which will have to be digital cuz coloured pencils piss me off. And thank you very much for the promise; I'll do my best!