HipnikDragomir's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Online Sis]

Fair

This is all right; definitely not some lowly scribble. Very nice job on the general image, especially the eyes. However, some of the facial features are a bit disproportionate, such as the chin, mouth, and nose. They are all too wide. Apart from that, s'all good.

[PlayStation 3 Slim]

Almost perfect

Like the PS2 model, it's photo-realistic. However, one problem I see is the space where the power and eject buttons are: it's too reflective. At first I though you put in a slot of some sort and it really looks odd. I don't have the Slim, but I'm pretty sure it's not that shiny.

EvilRaccoon responds:

Hey jjjkuk. I've actually did quite a bit of research on this, and there seems to be two versions out there. One being that there is one with a reflective surface whicch is like a mirror and another being a black reflective surface.

So i went with the one they used in their own advertising. The reflective one. :) Thanks for the comments.

[Rudolph's Secret]

Zing

Great twist on the old song.
Stay classy.

ToonHole responds:

Remember to tip your waitresses and bartenders. Goodnight.

[Taurus raging bull revolver]

Fancy

Here's what would help:

-Work on the handle (the part you hold, I dunno what it's called), the trigger, and the little thing that loads the next bullet.
-Sharpen the lines of the gun.
-Give the bullets outlines
-The design on the "handle" is poorly done

Apart from that, it's pretty, especially the barrel and spinny clickitty thing.

soulsapper responds:

Thanks for the reponse man :) I haven't been on...for a long long while :P but reading this i'll upload it again finished :D

I've had too much on my mind and things to do.

[Scarecrow]

BAMF

This looks incredible. You really did him justice making him look wicked. The blood and the maddening background are nice touches. I especially like the torn rope around his neck; it adds a bit of story to his background. Absolutely evil.

[Alone]

Peaceful

It's a dandy little painting with very pretty greens and yellows. The trees look are very well made and the grass is not too shabby. The fence, though, has its problems. It's generally very muddy looking, especially on the left, and on the right the top stick is too bent.

Joshsouza responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciate it. Yeah, I noticed that I completely failed on the fences. But thanks again :D

[Dwight Schrute]

That neck

I recall how towering it is; along with the forehead. Good job on exaggerating the stand-out features. It's exactly like one of those "professional" cartoon of celebrity caricatures. Colouring is nice and so is the shading.

judio90 responds:

Thanks!!! I work a lot to exagerate well.

PD: Sorry for my english.

[nice little walk]

Mostly

I saw your progress on the forums and I think it turned out very good. The grass is especially pretty and the light glowing off the giant. The only thing that bothers me is the tiny resolution; clearly, the actual image was bigger than this, so why not upload that? It would've also made the easter egg easier to spot.

[Leaving]

Better

Like Little Leather Lady minus the inconsistencies I listed. Another good filter and very styled hair. The shirt is very well drawn, too, with the ripples and shading and all; it looks very realistic, though the left arm's sleeve end is lacking. The left hand is also odd-looking; you need to work on the fingers wrapping around the strap. The necklace (?) being chewn up is a little weird, though. If she had it between her teeth, showing, it would have looked better. Proportions are also a bit odd: very thin arms with a sizable torso looks unbalanced. Maybe it's the art style, in which case is excusable. Good job.

JusticeBustedUs responds:

Oh, that iss sorta my style. I like to go for a slightly improportional yet still easy to look at kind of girl. See, im actually an abstract artist, but i know almost nothing about photoshop so you cant really tell. Plus i dont have a scanner, so that also takes away its values (shading, line depth, etc. Thats also why its got a bit of a shadow on it) but one of these days, i hope to prove to people like you, im not as bad as i seem, hahah. And by people like you, i mean people who want artists to improve. You've been so helpful :D thank you so much

[Little Leather Lady]

Cool

Good figure and proportions. I also like the filter/colour scheme. Y'know. That red/orangey effect. Btw, you might want to fix the face; everything but the eyebrows are way out there and ridiculous.

JusticeBustedUs responds:

Hahah, yes. I hv to agree.. i didnt notice until i started messing with it on photoshop. Ill be sure to work on it though :D thank youu